Paul, you have an interesting deadpan style here which has a strong Ian Dury overtone. We felt that there should have perhaps been a little more spark to bring power to the story, but you provide a sinister edge.

Paul, you commit nicely to the role here, but it is overly mechanical. The change in tone as you ask "did I hear you take our master's name in vain" goes without the correct pause and is not reflected in your eyes. It felt like a recital at this point. The character notes refer to to him having a better way with words and we would have liked to have felt a degree of sophistication to him however subtle. On the plus side, your Anli is downright scary, like the kid with the baseball bat in "Flatliners" he is sadistic and it feels like he is unstoppably savage. There is a character in here waiting to come out.

Paul, it's a shame that you didn't use the full minute to show us your abilities, but your threat is concise and direct, which makes it even more chilling. You are relaxed and menacing in front of the camera and have given us a great audition for the two characters you have nominated yourself for. Great work.